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Demon Green Eyes Chap.1

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Disclaimer: I do not own Naruto.

*Note: At the end of every chapter I will say what characters
of Masashi Kishimoto I used for the chapter, because I use a
lot of oc's in this.
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Demon Green Eyes
Chapter 1


He looked at his class which contained eight chatty 12-13 year olds. He then turned his gaze to the only child who wasn't talking. He was 11 with spiky brown hair, and magnificent light spring green eyes. He was wearing a blue long-sleeved shirt with an open white vest over it. His pants were navy blue, with tape at the bottom ending just above his blue ninja sandals. Around his neck was a golden colored, choker- like, necklace, with charms of ninja weapons, village signs,and one in the exact middle of a leaf village head-band hanging from it. Hanging from his waist was a piece of arm armor, obviously made to fit a woman's upper arm. On the armor it said "To my Love: I'll always catch you when you fall." The boy looked up, showing two long pointed pink marks, starting at the edge of his face ending a few inches away from his nose. (Two on each cheek)


"Something wrong Shikamaru sensei?" the boy asked revealing perfect white teeth that were sharper than they should be.


"Nothing Obito." He smiled at the boy then tried for his classes' attention. After a few tries he got it, so he started to speak. "Okay, I need your full attention now," he began "today is the ninja graduation exam. the test is on the cloning jutsu," Shikamaru said, waiting a little for the class to groan, all except Obito, who happened to like the cloning jutsu.  "When I call your name come into the next room to be tested." He looked at his class one more time before leaving to the testing room. 'This is going to be a long day, what a drag.' he thought to himself before entering the testing room.


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The green-eyed eleven year old looked at his sensei. His sensei had brown hair pulled back into a high ponytail, giving a spiky look to the hair. He was  wearing the standard jonin/chuunin outfit of the leaf, with one difference. His head-band was on his upper left arm.


"Okay Obito, you may begin," Shikamaru said. At that Obito performed the proper hand signs and yelled, "Shadow Clone Jutsu!"


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He looked  at her. She had waist length black  hair, tied in along braid. Her eyes were happy and bright, going well with her beautiful pumpkin orange eye color. She was wearing a white kimono looking dress with slits in the sleeves on the upper arms. Tied around her waist was a sash that went from dark navy blue to light blue. On her back was a sword and an odd shuriken like weapon. The sword had a white handle with an orange fringe hanging from it. The handle was connected to a spiral flame shape that was orange with a yellow tip. The blade was long and of a dark orange. The shuriken like weapon was black and blue with four enclosed large blue spirals and four small enclosed blue spirals. There was a large spiral on each corner with the smaller ones in between the larger ones. In the middle was a large black circle for the hand, that connected at each end to black strips that attached to black  arches that formed ovals with with the small spiral ends. The last part of her outfit was her blue ninja sandals.


"I'll tell you when you pass" he replied playfully poking her in the forehead with his index finger. With that he just walked away and sat down.


"That's not fair." she complained. This unusaliness for her made him smirk, before thinking about what had happened in the testing room.



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He had managed to produce over the level required using a jonin level technique, yet his sensei looked extremely displeased.

"Why?" was all Shikamaru had said.

"Why what?" asked Obito.

"Why are you still here Obito." Shikamaru said raising his voice toward the end. "You could have graduated at eight, yet you are still here! Why haven't you graduated yet?" Shikamaru yelled giving Obito a small fright. He then started speaking in a calm voice again. "Sorry. And I'm sorry but, I can't let you graduate until I know why you are still at the academy."

Obito just stared at his sensei. The reason he was still at the academy, even though he could have already graduated and became a chuunin, was because he was in love. Ever since he had entered the academy at seven, him and Keisuke were best friends. Though only being eight at the time he had realized that he was in love with the black-haired, orange- eyed girl named Keisuke. Only a few knew that Obito liked Keisuke, but none of them knew that he was in literal love with her, not that he would tell them. She was the reason he stayed. He hoped to be on the same squad as her. He knew that it was too personal to tell him, but he also knew that he had to if he wanted to graduate with her.


"The reason I'm still here is because I...I...I," as he said it  he just couldn't manage to say that he loves Keisuke. He then noticed a blue blur coming at him, which he had easily caught. He looked down at the blue object and smiled. It was a shinobi headband.


"Congrats. You pass." Shikamaru said smiling.


He jumped on to his sensei hugging him, saying the same two words over and over. "Thank you, thank you."


"Obito get off of me!" his sensei yelled.


With that he got off his sensei, apologized and walked out. Shikamaru just chuckled.


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When Obito opened his eyes, hanging in front of his face was a blue ninja headband.


"I passed, so now you have to tell me!" Keisuke said with pride in her voice.


"Fine." he sighed, then with a big grin on his face he said two simple words. "I passed."


Keisuke closed her eye, tilted her head  to the right, put her hands behind her, and smiled a simple, non-open mouth smile.



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Rows behind the two sat a boy who glared at the two. His onyx eyes full of hate for Obito.
Please comment!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Who ever comments will not get eaten by a demon, or half demon. Shikamaru is Masashi's the others are my oc's. The name Obito is also Masashi's, and the reason for his name and the armor thing will be explained later. I am looking for more oc's o please suggest some with profiles. For a better image of Keisuke go to [link] it is the one on the right.

Thank you for reading.
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awesome!! I loved it!!!